Saturday, March 7, 2015

New novella. "That was a monumental kiss," he said as she posed before the Great Sphinx. 'The Tomb Trap of Nitocris'

Getting carried away by the Sphinx






































Seems tourists are going a bit far at the site of the Great Sphinx.

Yet it reminds me of the opening scene in my latest novella...




CHAPTER 1                             





The girl moved through a straggle of tourists to the edge of a great pit.

Dan Loader felt his muscles tense.

She was standing above the Great Sphinx enclosure at Giza in Egypt, where the stone monster crouched inside a lion’s den of stone, its head and upper body emerging into a metal hot sky.

He stopped and willed her back from the edge. She fiddled with a camera. Could she slip and fall?

She looked around.

Freezing on the spot gave him away and she noticed him standing there doing an impression of a statue.

“Do I have to do a selfie?” she said.

They had crossed the invisible frontier between observer and the observed.

“Sorry?”

He said it more as an apology for breaking into her world. When you shadowed someone you did so from an objective distance, like viewing a movie or play, with the understanding that you did not belong in that reality and must never enter it.

Too late to move away.

The familiar snake of anxiety coiled inside him.

The creeping serpent of fear had come into his life after an abduction and assault over three days by an antiquities gang.

He saw it happening again as if in a flash of sunlight glancing off the stone sphinx. His partner Carl shot in the head execution style in an antiquities case gone wrong in London’s docklands. The way Carl dropped slackly, without a sound or a look of surprise in his eyes.

Two men then wrestling him into a van and driving him to a hideaway. Then the pain of hard fists and even harder steel gun barrels smashing into his head and face as they pistol-whipped him for information about a haul he had hidden away for protection.

The snake had slid into his insides and taken up residence there where his guts used to be and it moved at the slightest fear, setting up weakening tremors. The authorities had rescued him, but later, when there was no reason to be afraid any more, the snake was still there.

“Will you immortalise me?” she said.

Her voice, hazy sounding, had an overlay of beguiling mystery like a veil.

“Okay,” he said, shrugging.

Too late to back away now. Just do the business in a perfunctory way and hope she doesn't get too close a look at you.

His wrap-around dark glasses might help to hide him.

She held out the camera and he took it from her, a compact black digital model.

First contact.

A gentle brush with her skin, her hand cool and light – his, like a big stone paw of the sphinx.

“You know the shot I’m after, I suppose,” she said. “Sorry, it’s cheesy, but I can’t resist it.”

He nodded.

He understood. It was the compulsory tourist shot that young women always wanted taken of themselves in front of Egypt’s Great Sphinx.

“Maybe move away from the edge. Good,” he said, letting the tension ease from his shoulders. “Now lean your head forward.”

She posed in profile in front of the calm face of the stone beast and bent her neck, making her dark hair swing. He looked at the camera display screen.

“Head a bit higher and move in. A little closer. That’s it.”

She pouted her crimson lips and moved in so that she appeared to kiss the stone lips of the most famous face in the world.

“That was a monumental kiss,” he said.

He had it, an image of a girl’s face, the same size as the sphinx’s, planting a big smooch right on the lips of an ancient wonder of the world.

It was a trick of perspective.

Or so it usually appeared, but this was also a trick of time for the scene appeared to be an image of Egypt itself kissing the ancient past. The girl, along with a quality of classic loveliness, possessed an unmistakeable aura of ancient Egypt, her eyes darkly edged and swept up in fantails at the side, shadowed with malachite green, and her cascade of dark hair rippling to her shoulders.

He had a fleeting moment of envying the sphinx.