‘It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must
be in want of a wife.’
Imagine Jane Austen’s opening
sentence from Pride and Prejudice with the 'rules' applied.
This famous line breaks at least three hobgoblin 'rules':
This famous line breaks at least three hobgoblin 'rules':
'It is' makes a weak opening for a sentence.
Avoid adverbs
Avoid passive voice
‘All things were created through Him…’
Imagine John without the mysterious
agency of the ‘passive’ voice.
Using adverbs and the passive voice should not be universally banned from your writing armoury. It depends entirely on the effect you're trying to create.
Just saying.
(Sorry, I have a bit of a thing about rules being applied today.)